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December 13, 2010
By poetrygoddess GOLD, Los Lunas, New Mexico
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Shell I compare him to a living star
He is far more special to me you see
As god to my lifting me up so far
A living star may not live as so free
A living star may be too sharp to feel
May be quite too far to meet in my love
And he truly matches my love as real
He may bring me peace unlike a lone dove
In nature a living star may not live
By a chance he lives in a normal life
As long as I breath and my heart beats
That’s how long with him I shell feel complete

© Greg K., New Lenox, IL

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i had to write this for my pre. AP english class. what do you think?
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