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The Love Story of a Boy and His Game

April 7, 2011
By esnow824 BRONZE, Burbank, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Go fall down a hole.&quot;<br /> &quot;No! See, that&#039;s not nice. The nice way to do it is to say &#039;Go take a long walk off a short pier.&quot;<br /> &quot;GO TAKE A REALLLLLYYY LONG WALK OFF OF A TINYYY PIER!&quot;

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He promises his love will never die;
He waited in long lines for its debut.
"Believe me when I say I will not lie
This game is one of which I will pursue."
Watching the screen intently as he plays
With precise aim, he kills another foe.
He could get them all, but he cannot stay
The enemy will get him, this he knows.
The screen is covered with its trademark red
Headset on, he barks orders to his friends.
"Revive me soon, or else I'll end up dead!"
...This looks as if it is the bitter end.
The game, cut short, because his life was lost
The boy is nothing now without Black Ops.

The author's comments:
Inspired 100% by my 10 year old brother, who is obsessed with Call of Duty: Black Ops. I had to write a sonnet for a big project, so I used him.
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esnow824 BRONZE said...
on May. 6 2011 at 12:34 am
esnow824 BRONZE, Burbank, California
4 articles 4 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Go fall down a hole.&quot;<br /> &quot;No! See, that&#039;s not nice. The nice way to do it is to say &#039;Go take a long walk off a short pier.&quot;<br /> &quot;GO TAKE A REALLLLLYYY LONG WALK OFF OF A TINYYY PIER!&quot;

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Thank you! And yeah, it's a lot of fun to get on here. I think the next class will really like it.

OMG It's the teddy bear!!

askmisterD said...
on May. 5 2011 at 11:00 pm

Well done, Erica! I like Teen Ink. I'm going to try to get more kids published here next year.

(￣(工)￣)

mrd

esnow824 BRONZE said...
on May. 4 2011 at 10:58 pm
esnow824 BRONZE, Burbank, California
4 articles 4 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Go fall down a hole.&quot;<br /> &quot;No! See, that&#039;s not nice. The nice way to do it is to say &#039;Go take a long walk off a short pier.&quot;<br /> &quot;GO TAKE A REALLLLLYYY LONG WALK OFF OF A TINYYY PIER!&quot;

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Ahh. Sorry. That didn't make sense. 

What I meant to say was Thank you! And that you know me, but I can't tell who you are from your username. :)

esnow824 BRONZE said...
on May. 4 2011 at 10:52 pm
esnow824 BRONZE, Burbank, California
4 articles 4 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Go fall down a hole.&quot;<br /> &quot;No! See, that&#039;s not nice. The nice way to do it is to say &#039;Go take a long walk off a short pier.&quot;<br /> &quot;GO TAKE A REALLLLLYYY LONG WALK OFF OF A TINYYY PIER!&quot;

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Thanks! I know you know me... I can't tell from your username :) Tell me at school.

But I appreciate it a lot :)

smileymiley33 said...
on May. 4 2011 at 10:50 pm
omg! erica i love it! it totally winner worthy! uv made myself and mr.d proud!