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A Passion

May 5, 2011
By Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote


No feelings can compare to the ones you have for me.None can touch the ones I have for you.When i see you I flutter with glee,For to you,no harm i can do.To you my love is true.

When you walk down the street i cant help but to stare,It's you i want to meet with your soothing hair.Your midnight blue eyes put me in a daze,and you posses a great personality which purifies my heart and takes the pain away!!!!!!!


The author's comments:
I just felt love

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on Feb. 9 2012 at 1:37 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote

alright.thanks for the input

on Feb. 9 2012 at 1:36 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote

thanks.although i wrote this randomly

on Feb. 9 2012 at 6:06 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> --Eleanor Roosevelt

The words are good, but the way your poem is organized looks too jumbled. I would suggest that you separate the lines, so it doesn't seem like a first draft.

on Jan. 5 2012 at 2:56 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Show no love, and feel no pain&quot;...self quote

well lets say 4:00 pm.......next monday.....if you feel comfortable with giving me your email then can u give it to me because other wise we cant talk

on Jan. 4 2012 at 2:57 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Show no love, and feel no pain&quot;...self quote

alright then ill corect myself the next time

on Dec. 24 2011 at 2:51 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Show no love, and feel no pain&quot;...self quote

love stinks and everyone just keep checking on here...im trying to publish more frequently now...hope you enjoy

on Dec. 19 2011 at 5:33 pm
musicmissy SILVER, Orlando, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Knock knock who&#039;s there we are&quot; by Daniel Beaty

Okay u give me a time and date

on Dec. 13 2011 at 11:41 pm
FatesMistake13, Springerville, Arizona
0 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Most people die of a sort of creeping common sense, and discover when it is too late that the only things one never regrets are one&#039;s mistakes.&quot; Oscar Wilde <br /> <br /> &quot;The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame.&quot;

Aww this is adorabley cute :) love it muches

on Dec. 11 2011 at 9:51 am
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Show no love, and feel no pain&quot;...self quote

thanks everyone....i do my best.....music missy...i think we should talk more....i have a few questions to ask you

on Dec. 11 2011 at 9:50 am
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Show no love, and feel no pain&quot;...self quote

i think so too

on Dec. 10 2011 at 6:51 pm
musicmissy SILVER, Orlando, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Knock knock who&#039;s there we are&quot; by Daniel Beaty

Awww i think im in love with you

on Dec. 9 2011 at 3:05 pm
TheGracefulWriter BRONZE, Cleghorn, Iowa
1 article 19 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is one roller coaster we never get off of. It will go up and down, but never stop.&quot; -Me <br /> <br /> &quot;Life&#039;s A Climb, But The View&#039;s Great.&quot; Miley Cyrus<br /> <br /> A girl needs to be so lost in God a guy has to seek Him to find her.

It cute and sweet! Good job on it!

on Dec. 8 2011 at 4:22 pm
Lovestinks1395 GOLD, Plainfield, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
God save us everyone we will burn inside thefire of a thousand suns.

That was beautiful and creative. Continue writing, I would love to see more work from you!!!!!!!!

on Dec. 7 2011 at 9:05 pm
simbaspride SILVER, Keene, Virginia
7 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You were born an original, don&#039;t die a copy&quot; John Mason

Cute. <3 I really like it. 

5/5 

Some grammatical errrors but other than that it's great. :)