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Love Is Pain

November 11, 2011
By boobear100 SILVER, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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boobear100 SILVER, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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what dont kill me will make me stronger

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You said you loved me, me and only me.
You said you cared, and will never let me go.
You said you'll protect, now and forever.


Why!? Why did you lie to me?
Why did you like me with a wounded heart?
Why come into my life knowing you wouldn't stay?
Just tell me why! is love pain?


You said you loved me, me and only me.
You said you cared and you'll never let me go.
You said you'll protect me, now and forever.

Why!? Why is Love Is Pain?
When will this all end?

© Liza C., Seattle, WA

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I was just trying something knew. Trying to see if someone would feedback so I can make this into a good sonnet. Also so I can figure out what a sonnet really is.
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Kparker27 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:40 am
Kparker27 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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"In the end, it's still best to wait for the one we want rather than settle for what's available. It's still best to wait for the one you love rather than to settle for the one who's around. It's still best to wait for the right person, because life's too short to waste on the wrong one."

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I relate to this.