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Promotion and Devotion

May 30, 2012
By briannamaryyy GOLD, Clinton, Connecticut
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"I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go. Things go wrong so that you appreciate them when they go right. You believe lies so you eventually trust no one but yourself, and sometimes good things fall apart, so that better things can fall together." -Marilyn Monroe

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Your heart was a cold as a deep freeze,
Your mouth always pushing out lies,
Doing whatever it is you please,
Always acting deep in thought and wise,
You tore my heart out and threw it on the ground,
You had my brain all over the place,
And I was no longer sound,
If I could go back in time, I would wish to erase,
Meeting you was the worst day of my life,
Your face is permanently engraved in my mind,
In little time you caused so much strife,
I still don’t know how you had me completely blind,
You’re a bad person says the unanimous vote,
And that is something I’ll always promote.

© Cerys W., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
I wrote this about an ex, whom always lied and confused me to the point of no return. I used a sonnet form as a type of poetry that is always about love and romance and changed it to anger and sadness. I feel it worked well.
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