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Take Me First

October 14, 2013
By Gooseman GOLD, Roxbury, Connecticut
Gooseman GOLD, Roxbury, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
A creative man is motivated by the desire to achieve, not by the desire to beat others.


I hope I die first
So that not to live
A single day
With no love to give

I wouldn't survive
A day on my own
If you were gone
And I was alone

If you were gone
And all that remained
Were all of our memories
And the mind they stained

My heart would be broken
Torn from my soul
If I lost the one person
That once made me whole



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xG4RY GOLD said...
on Oct. 17 2013 at 6:57 pm
xG4RY GOLD, East Falmouth, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"The shorter it is, the more well said it is."

What kind of sonnet is this? What is it written in? Why did you call this a sonnet?