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Hi Always

August 16, 2014
By Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
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Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust." --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

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I miss our walks, our talks
Moments alone, and with crowds of people
I keep those memories safe in a box
To visit as we stand under the steeple

The day I left I felt so alone
You were with me, but still so far
Keeping your gifts close, your love shown
Every mile I sat in the car,

Was another mile away from you
You are my heart, my world, my everything
With you no sky is ever blue
Our love is eternal, not a fling

Hi to the power of hi,
My heart is yours until I die

© Michelle B., West Covina, CA

The author's comments:
Recently I had to move to another state, away from my boyfriend. Everyone says long distance won't work, but I know we can do it with a little bit of faith, trust, and pixie dust ;) If you are reading this babe, I love you :)
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EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 1 2014 at 1:31 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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Haha, yes. Jesus does make a wonderful boyfriend ; )
Princess.Renda GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2014 at 1:01 pm
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust." --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

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Hey, Caramel! Thank you so much for comenting. Its good to know, (in a strange way) that other people understand the pain of leaving, or having someone you love leave. I'm sure your boyfriend won't be distracted by any scenery, how could he forget about someone as sweet as you? You and him will be in my prayers, darlin'. Stay confident and stay beautiful, love :)
Princess.Renda GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2014 at 12:58 pm
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust." --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

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Thanks EmilyD :) Jesus makes a fabtabulous boyfriend btw ;)
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 22 2014 at 1:59 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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This is sweet. I ahve never had a boyfriend, I have never dated. But I've started saying that Jesus is my boyfriend, which is weird I know lol. I found inspiring, beautiful, and sweet. Thank you for sharing this. 
Xena_Zionne GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2014 at 9:24 am
Xena_Zionne GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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“I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best.” -Marilyn Monroe

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hi renda. i completely understand you. I love your poem. my boyfriend had to move away to and many people just didn't get why i was so heartbroken. they say boys will come and go but he's the only one that i wanted to stay. I always thought the new scenery would make him forget about me but after reading your poem, i'm confident he won't. love always- Caramel