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Beginings

November 7, 2014
By Jonah Halbert GOLD, Booneville, Mississippi
Jonah Halbert GOLD, Booneville, Mississippi
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There will be new beginings;

Just see for yourself.

Whenever you feel like givin' up,

All you have to do is beleive in yourself.

 

There will be new beginings,

So that you know,

Whenever you're feeling down,

Know you are not alone.

 

There is much in life ti live for,

Just see for yourself,-

'Cause you aren't the only broken hearted person in this world.


The author's comments:

I hope you take this to heart. This is the truth.


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on Nov. 20 2014 at 7:09 pm
Jonah Halbert GOLD, Booneville, Mississippi
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Thank you so much! I am glad to be a part of teenink!

on Nov. 20 2014 at 12:35 pm
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust." --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

I truley enjoyed readin this, darlin. It is well written, and it says  a lot. Just the other day actually someone said everyone has their own tragety they are dealing with, some people are just better at hiding it than others. That may have been a quote I saw actually... Either way, it reminds me of this poem. I do love how you say we aren't alone, there are other broken hearts in this world. It really is inspiering to be reminded of that. THank you so much for sharing this :) Keep writing, dear ^^

on Nov. 13 2014 at 10:18 am
Jonah Halbert GOLD, Booneville, Mississippi
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Ok. Would you be okay with giving me some ideas and topics to write about? That would help me alot. Thanks for supporting me!

on Nov. 13 2014 at 10:17 am
Jonah Halbert GOLD, Booneville, Mississippi
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ok. I would like it if you could give me some ideas on what to write about.

on Nov. 12 2014 at 8:28 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

No problem! If you need any more help with anything, let me know and I'd be glad to help.

on Nov. 12 2014 at 3:30 pm
Jonah Halbert GOLD, Booneville, Mississippi
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Thanks so much! That is my motivation to write.

on Nov. 12 2014 at 3:02 pm
Nightingale74 PLATINUM, Beavercreek, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;When you need something to believe in, believe in yourself.&quot;<br /> &quot;A poem unwritten is only a thought; unshared, unsaid...&quot;

Thank you for brightening my day with this poem, Jonah!! I especially loved the line, "When ever you feel like givin' up, all you have to do is believe in yourself," because I think it is so true. When you need someone to believe in, believe in yourself. Because you're always going to be there for yourself, even when no one else is. I really hope others take this poem to heart because I know I have!

on Nov. 12 2014 at 12:36 pm
Jonah Halbert GOLD, Booneville, Mississippi
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I have already got about 5 other poems posted on teenink. Look 'em up! By the way, thanks 4 the feedback. I will keep that in mind next time I write a poem.

on Nov. 12 2014 at 12:32 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never fear shadows. They simply mean there&#039;s a light shining somewhere nearby.&quot; - Unknown

Cute first stanza! I love the rhyming. Maybe write "giving" instead of "givin'" to make it a little more sophisticated. I really like the ending line; its chilling and mysterious. Keep the rhyming going thought! It seems so unfinished without an ending rhyme. Maybe adjust the other lines around the last one so you can keep the last one. Besides some minor spelling errors, nice job. I'll look for more from you in the future.

on Nov. 12 2014 at 10:33 am
Jonah Halbert GOLD, Booneville, Mississippi
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Please tell me your thoughts on this.