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Sonnet: Mortal Egotism

January 16, 2015
By exhaust SILVER, Riverside, California
exhaust SILVER, Riverside, California
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It seems the heaven’s elements did quake

Before I left, a hasty verdict reached
For earthly rot most certainly did ache
And thus, eternal Arms I fast beseeched.
In everlasting kingdoms may You reign!
Your artistry transcends the strain of time!
The potency existent in Your name
Allows the mortal man to be sublimed.
But with a sturdy tremble from above
You cautioned that my work was not complete.
Your perfect plan for earthly life, thereof
I could, with these pretentious hands, delete. 
Forgive me Lord, for lying down to rest,
I’d wait until the time You thought was best.



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on Jan. 22 2015 at 9:33 pm
Amanda Tonks BRONZE, Draper, Utah
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The flow of this is beautiful and I'm elated that you labeled it as mortal egotism! I love the line,"I could with these pretentious hands,delete." It's powerful and that's what I realized what you were talking about. I love how it's not focused on the depressing elements of this subject but on the gentle love you can feel in the depths of your despair. Thank you for writing this.