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Little Jimmy

March 13, 2015
By onetrueword DIAMOND, Chiang Mai, Other
onetrueword DIAMOND, Chiang Mai, Other
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My eyes couldn’t get away from you
Your smile eliminating darkness from around
I could never ignore you, as you have sparking eyes- brighter than morning dew.
Bright, sun-like smiles you give me, my heart surrounds

Your wiggling toes and curious fingers
Grasp at and explore the world, always probing, testing
As I leave the comfort of our house, your soft smell lingers
Urging me to hurry back, my precious blessing

Your pink and cute toothless coos
Warming my heart with your cheerful sound
Your worry-less dreams flew
Melting everyone around, making purpose of life to be found

No wonder your cuteness is apparent from afar
Onlookers noting how adorable you are



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on Mar. 18 2015 at 12:11 pm
onetrueword DIAMOND, Chiang Mai, Other
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Thank you!

on Mar. 16 2015 at 5:08 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

That was so sweet I love it. I just love the way you describe every special little thing about this little cutie ^_^ It was so beautiful, poetic and very detailed, great job on that. And also I felt like i was holding, playing and feeling this baby around, that's why I think your poem is really strong. Keep it up ^_^ Thank you for sharing this by the way I love babies ;)

on Mar. 15 2015 at 1:51 am
onetrueword DIAMOND, Chiang Mai, Other
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This is a shakespearean sonnet......:)