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The Ocean Tide

April 25, 2009
By Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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The ocean tide washes over,
Banks of crystal white sand.
Gentle waves reach out,
covering the land.

The salty water brings,
Fish and rocks and shells.
The sight so very pretty,
I hear the sound of bells.

Moonlight streams down,
Glistening of a wave.
A place of natural beauty,
A place worth to save.

© Adam L., Washington, DC

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Ever since I saw the ocean I was struck by it's beauty. When I think about poems normally I think of a a specific place or feeling. this is what I came up with. Please comment so I can know what you think of it. Thanks!
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Lost-In-Life GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:36 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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Thank you! I appreciate the comments! 
Lost-In-Life GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 11:10 am
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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My last line a place worth to save is supposed to be showing the feeling. I meant the first part to be describing the beach, and it's beauty, and the last line to show how we should be saving the natural beauties still around us, like this beach. I'm sorry if that didn't get across to well.
biggerinfinities SILVER said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 8:58 am
biggerinfinities SILVER, Superior, Colorado
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&ldquo;We accept the love we think we deserve.&rdquo; <br /> ― Stephen Chbosky, The Perks of Being a Wallflower

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i like it, but it seems to just be a description, although a good one. if you wanted it tohave a feeling yo would probobly have to change it some
chocolateharp SILVER said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 7:05 pm
chocolateharp SILVER, Plaistow, New Hampshire
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&quot;Dear God,&quot; she prayed, &quot;let me be something every minute of every hour of my life. Let me be gay; let me be sad. Let me be cold; let me be warm. Let me be hungry...have too much to eat. Let me be ragged or well dressed. Let me be sincere - be deceitful. Let me be truthful; let me be a liar. Let me be honorable and let me sin. Only let me be something every blessed minute. And when I sleep, let me dream all the time so that not one little piece of living is ever lost.&quot; - Betty Smith (A Tree Grows in Brooklyn)

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This is beautiful! I can picture the beach and waves as I read it. :)
Malory_Sturling BRONZE said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 9:30 pm
Malory_Sturling BRONZE, Medford, Massachusetts
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&quot;Good writing can make you look at something unbelievable and doubt yourself by believing that it is real.&quot; &hearts;<br /> <br /> &quot;You can get a thousand compliments, but one failure can tear you down; don&#039;t let it.&quot;<br /> ~Malory Sturling &hearts;

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wow! that was amazing, simple, yet beautiful...simplicity can at times say most. =D