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Who?
It all started on July 30, 2001.
The scream,
the knife,
the roar of an engine,
but I’m getting ahead of myself.
My name is Hugh Stark,
and I am here to tell you a story.
A story of
money,
cruelty,
and…
revenge.
So, here we go.
The wind was
blowing
and clouds were
moving
across the sky, as Miss September Cole stepped
out of her car and onto Mr. Karnowski’s gravel driveway.
She was closely followed by her two
daughters,
Sky and Rebecca.
Rap,
Rap,
Rap,
Went the silver knocker
on Peter Karnowski’s door.
The door
opened
and Mr. Karnowski stepped out.
He greeted everyone and welcomed them inside.
They all sat down at the table and had a hearty meal,
before
crashing in the living room.
Cuckoo
Cuckoo
Went the clock, signaling the dawn of a new hour, and
Rebecca
and
Sky stood up.
May I be excused to the kitchen for a cup of
coffee?
asked Sky.
I’m going to the bathroom,
blurted Rebecca.
And they both
left.
Rap,
Rap,
Rap,
Went the silver knocker
on Peter Karnowski’s door.
I’ll get it.
called Mr. Karnowski.
Behind the door stood a mailman,
whose big bushy beard seemed to cover his face.
This is where the story turns.
No one saw it, but
everyone
heard Mr. Karnowski fall.
The loud thud.
The mailman’s scream of, Oh My God!
And the last
thud.
The following silence was broken
by the sound of feet,
pounding,
sliding,
and racing
towards the door.
Closely followed by another scream,
but this time
it belonged to September.
There, slumped in
a lake of
blood,
was Mr. Karnowski.
Next to him was the mailman’s unconscious body
and
a
bloody
knife.
The sound of approaching footsteps woke the Cole’s
from their horrified stance and
panic
started
to
kick
in.
Mr. Karnowski's neighbor; Jonathan Lee rounded the corner.
I heard a scream,
he said.
Suddenly, the mailman
started to stir.
The Cole’s could only watch as,
his stare landed on the body
as he panicked,
as he screamed
and as he ran back towards his mailvan
and drove away as fast as he could.
Does all of that seem right, Ms. Cole?
I asked.
I was sitting behind a row of bars,
looking into a dark cell occupied by one person only,
Sky Cole.
Her face was red from crying
and
her throat weak from yelling.
The damp mold in the corners
and
the bleakness of the empty cell
only added to her terror.
Yes. It does Mr. Stark-
Sky started, but I quickly interrupted her.
Please, call me Hugh.
I said, while flashing her one of my signature
smiles.
Now, do you know why you are the prime
suspect, Ms. Cole?
No! I don’t understand. I didn’t do anything wrong.
I would never hurt anyone…
She started to sobb once more.
Ms. Cole! Please bring yourself together. There
is only one reason why you are the prime
suspect. You have no motive, but you were
in the only room in the house that contained
the murder weapon. Were you not in the
kitchen before the murder took place?
Yes, I was but you must believe me. I would never
hurt anyone!
After three hours all I could get out
of Sky was that she
would never hurt anyone, so
I decided to pack my stuff
and leave.
The next day, I was going to question the others at the
crime scene, so I needed rest anyway.
***
I arrived at Peter’s house and I stepped out onto the drive.
I looked up at the ancient house,
It’s pristine condition somewhat annoyed me.
The beautiful brick,
the furnished windows,
and the freshly
mowed
lawn.
Rap,
Rap,
Rap,
Went the silver knocker
on Peter Karnowski’s door.
I opened the door and stepped inside.
I looked around me and saw that
Miss September Cole was sobbing,
Rebecca was texting,
and Jonathan was staring out the window.
I cleared my throat
and
silence
fell.
I would like to speak with each of you
individually. Miss Cole will you please come
with me?
Please Mr. Stark, Sky can’t live out the rest of her
life in jail… She never killed Peter, you must
believe me! Miss Cole cried.
Please, call me Hugh, and believe me,
Miss Cole, I know. Now please tell me
about your history with Peter.
Peter was one of my closest friends. He was
smart,
funny,
handsome…
I’m sorry it’s hard to describe him as was and not
is…
He was a great man,
but
he did owe me quite
a
bit
of
money.
You see, a while back, Peter was trying to start his
own business and he needed a loan.
I lent him some money, but he never paid me
back.
That’s why we came over for dinner last night, but
now I will never talk to him again! I’m sorry! I
just...
miss him
so
much.
Don’t worry about the money, Miss Cole,
because Peter left everything he had,
to you.
***
Now Rebecca, what do you think of this
whole ordeal?
I noticed you on your phone do you
not
care
about
Peter?
I never really knew the old man. I knew he owed us
money, but other than that
no,
not really.
Sky on the other hand did,
and she deserves
to rot in that cell.
Why is that?
I asked, thinking that I might have found a
motive.
Why should I tell you?
Because I too have an emotional connection
to this case. Peter and I used to be college
roommates back in 85’.
Were you guys still close when
he died?
asked Rebecca.
I couldn’t help but laugh.
No,
I responded.
We had a bit of a falling out after he stole
my girlfriend, Julia.
Now she couldn’t help but laugh.
Now, if I was in your shoes I would’ve gotten him
kicked off the campus
or at least retaliated.
***
Jonathan, you were across the street when
the murder occured, correct?
I was done with flimsy stories,
alibis,
and revenge plots.
It was time to get some evidence.
Yes, I was.
Did you see who committed the murder?
I’m sorry, mate, I wish I could help, but I didn’t see
anything.
I heard Mr. Karnowski yell
and Miss Cole scream,
but other than that nothing.
I am new to the neighborhood as well, so I haven’t
known Pete for very long either.
So much for a solid story.
Thank you for your time. You may go.
Sorry, mate.
Also, I was wondering if I had ever seen you
before?
No, I don’t think so.
I just have one of those
faces.
I guess so.
Wait, did you have a different profession before
becoming a detective?
I used to be a mailman.
but those days are long gone now.
I sat down in a leather arm chair in the living room.
The clock across the room said that it was 3:58pm.
It was getting late so,
I tried to come up
with an idea.
Almost everyone has a motive.
no matter if it’s
revenge
or greed,
I know someone in this house is guilty.
Rap,
Rap,
Rap,
Went the silver knocker
on Peter Karnowski’s door.
This time Rebecca answered the door.
Behind the door were two police officers in crisp and
Freshly ironed uniforms.
Hello, we are here to investigate in murder of
Mr. Peter Karnowski.
they said.
I got up and started to walk to the back door.
I’m sorry, but there must be some
mistake. We already have a detective.
Rebecca responded.
What is the name of the officer on duty?
His name is Hugh Stark.
Who?

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I was inspired to write this piece by a book called The Long Way Down by Jason Renolds