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Season's Perfect Tunes

December 6, 2009
By munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
18 articles 1 photo 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan


Season had 4 daughters
Summer was brave, winter was cautious
Spring loved all things pink
Autumn loved time to think

Summer loved to smile and play
Her blond hair shone throughout day
Summer was a friend
She was true until the end

Spring loved to paint and draw
Her hazel eyes shone at the blossoms she adored
Spring was an artist
She was beautiful and harmless

Autumn loved to sit and think
Her soft hair shone as she wrote in black ink
Autumn was a wordsmith
She was sweet, and almost perfect

Winter loved to give and care
Her black eyes shone at icy lairs
Winter was a surgeon
She was cold, but more beneath the surface

And all her daughters loved to sing
And never ever out of key
Each of them had a different tune
But each one shone like a perfect moon


The author's comments:
This poem was inspired by two things: one was reading To Autumn by John Keats and wanting to try personification out in writing (aswell as repetition) and also a discussion with my friends about which was the worst season, and the realization that all the seasons were good for different reasons

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on May. 6 2010 at 12:33 pm
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
18 articles 1 photo 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan

wow thanks! Thats really nice of you, you like it better than I do

on Apr. 30 2010 at 12:25 pm
kookymnstr PLATINUM, Crowder, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
" One good thing about music, When it hits you, You feel no pain."- Bob Marley

This is truely the best poem on this entire site. I love the way it all just fits perfectly together, and the story pretty.