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Love Poem to Free Association MAG

March 29, 2008
By Anonymous

A pencil in hand, I try to discuss the differing uses of Ser and Estar
But you tease me,
throw the paper in my face,
Then show me how much more
the world can be.

You’re so much fun to be around,
Because you don’t follow the normal progression
of thought,
Instead, preferring to choose a different path,
You amble along at the speed of light,
pulling me with you
away from orthodoxy, the straight-line
philosophy
and into unbelievable, all over the map.

Though some may stare in disapproval
at our tangential state of being,
Every night I say a silent thank you to
Freud –
Because of him, I’ve got a name
And a method to this brilliant madness.

You conduct my thoughts in a whirlwind,
and make simple existence a fantastical
dream,
An unbearable yet breathtaking venture
into everything that catches
our sparkling eyes.



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on Feb. 15 2013 at 8:10 pm
Gracias1996 SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. <br /> Lao Tzu

Nice Poem!!! Hey guys, am a new writer- check out my work!!!! and pls feel free to post comments :)

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on Mar. 15 2012 at 7:37 pm
ImJustAGuy BRONZE, Oakland, California
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Check out my work please !  Im a new a upcoming writer

on Aug. 8 2011 at 3:46 pm
HannSawyer15 BRONZE, North Brunswick, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I say... lets speak it. Lets fight it. Lets write it. There&#039;s nothing to hold on to if it&#039;s already gone.&quot;

I really really loved this. Awesome. :)

reblep GOLD said...
on May. 16 2011 at 4:08 pm
reblep GOLD, Chester, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
the sun through my window, warming my skin...

i can relate to this one hundred percent. especially since the boy i liked, and wrote so many poems about, was the one who teased me in spanish (:

i love this so much dont ever stop writing. 


on Apr. 20 2011 at 7:37 pm
shy_Amu_girl BRONZE, Brook Park, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Everyone starts with nothing, then a story grows (Snow White, Cinderella)

i really like this poem. im kinda new here (just created an account) and just finished 1 poem. in my language class, we had to share, and the poem that i put on here, was the one i shared. i was sooo nervous. espically because the poem i wrote was about a boy, even better, he was in the room, EVEN more better, stting next to me... i was shaking after, which made him ask me if i was ok. still shaking now..... is this common? lol

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on Apr. 20 2011 at 11:39 am
migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never let the future disturb you. You will meet it, if you have to, with the same weapons of reason which today arm you against the present.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

Way fantastic.

Please never stop writing, world needs talent like yours to keep it beautiful :D


on Mar. 29 2011 at 8:15 am
dontforget GOLD, Cortland, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The best things in life are left unseen. That&#039;s why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream.&quot;

aww:) this is so relateable it's freakyy! I feel the same way about the boy that sits behind me in spanishhh!

on Mar. 18 2011 at 7:58 am
BitterSweet1993 SILVER, Bronx, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Love is only a dirty trick played on us to achieve continuation of the species. ~W. Somerset Maugham, A Writer&#039;s Notebook, 1949

Amazing. I hope I can find something that great too. <3

on Dec. 9 2010 at 1:02 pm
KelseyMai BRONZE, Jackson, Ohio
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Aww. Soo sweet.

on Dec. 9 2010 at 8:36 am
okay ummhhii ii like your poem itz nice n ii wiilllike to use iit.... thank you.....

Photo_97 said...
on Oct. 15 2010 at 9:47 pm
Photo_97, Ct., Connecticut
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i feel this way right now with a boy i know and gosh you hit my gut with this poem. keep it up this rocked :)

on Oct. 4 2010 at 1:01 pm
OpenDoors SILVER, Laramie, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Darker the night Brighter the day, Feirser the Fight, Stronger the Faith.&quot;

this was such an amazing poem. there really are no words to describe about your poem. Maybe unique!! (in a good way i mean)

Dianeyka said...
on Oct. 4 2010 at 12:33 pm
Dianeyka, Kissimee, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;if you Deny Me in Front of your friends, I Will Deny you at thee heaven Gates&quot;- Jesus &hearts; :)

this is so cutee :0

I Love itt :)


on Jul. 8 2010 at 4:22 am
HalliewoodYeaah BRONZE, Huntington, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Children aren&#039;t coloring books. You don&#039;t get to fill them with your favorite colors.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Khaled Hosseini

I don't think I'm saying anything the other 23 commenters haven't, but -- that was amazing, absolutely beautiful. keep it up :)

on Apr. 26 2010 at 9:27 pm
LostButNeverFound PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Life is too short to wake up with regrets. So love the people who treat you right. Forget about the one&#039;s who don&#039;t. Believe everything happens for a reason. If you get a second chance, grab it with both hands. If it changes your life, let it. Nobody said life would be easy, they just promised it would be worth it. Friends are like balloons: once you let them go, you can&#039;t get them back. So I&#039;m gonna tie you to my heart so I never lose you.

wows=] that was great

on Apr. 25 2010 at 11:55 pm
Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
This too shall pass.

God, this is beautiful...absolutely amazing.

on Aug. 5 2009 at 1:32 am
Blue-eyed_Hippy-chick, Barry, Texas
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That is amazin! Love it to peices.

Lamar Cole said...
on Jul. 14 2009 at 6:54 pm
The Night Was Made For Romance



The night was made for romance.

In the night our two hearts dance.

Under the stars our lips touch.

In the garden your embrace means so much.



The night was made for love.

Our hearts cooing like a white dove.

Your eyes sparkling like diamonds so white.

I love you darling with all my might.



The night was made for caring and trust.

And darling, God made this night for us.

Lamar Cole said...
on Jul. 14 2009 at 6:46 pm
Our Love



As long as there is love, I will cherish you.



As long as there is life, I will love you.



As long as the stars shine above, I will want you.



As long as there are waves in the ocean, I will need you.



As long as there is heaven above, there will always be our love.