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Erode
January 10, 2013
Coming in the tides
Water meets the earth's facade
to mock the rigid
© Lukas D., Conway, AR
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This article has 6 comments.
Padoodallee GOLD said...
on Jun. 1 2013 at 5:56 pm
I was trying to explain how water, a very open and flowing thing, can destroy rock, something firm and rigid. I was using erosion as an analogy to ourselves. We all stand firm on some subject, but usually we aren't completely right. If we don't let our mind open to the truth, water, the truth will destroy us. That might be kind of confusing, but that was the best way I could explain it =P
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 19 2013 at 12:06 pm
I really like your work! sure
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 19 2013 at 12:05 pm
Sure thing!
Padoodallee GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2013 at 7:19 pm
thanks for the feedback! It would be great if you could comment on a few of my other poems too =)
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 18 2013 at 5:42 pm
It needs something that makes it stands out maye you should change the last line?
