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September 27, 2011
By MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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when you look at me?
what do you see?
I am the color black
a soul is what lack
so the shadows find me
the lock to my heart
which has no key
when i am alone
such agony makes me moan

looking at me
what do you see
if only i could be free

© Matt F., Pierz, MN

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MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:05 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments
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you know you want a piece of this lol
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:03 am
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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thats what YOU think!! ;) LOL
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:02 am
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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thats what YOU think! ;)
MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:56 pm
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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yup im really hot
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:52 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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lol! like totally! ;) hahaha
Morbidity said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:45 pm
Morbidity, Nowhere, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes you have to give up your life to save it.&quot;

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tell mew ur name
Morbidity said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:44 pm
Morbidity, Nowhere, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes you have to give up your life to save it.&quot;

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lol. ur such a flirt *rollz eyez*
MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:32 pm
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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so you dont have to know me
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:28 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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um..your age? no. but you? i dont know you! lol
MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:09 pm
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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17 am i too old for you lol
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 9:34 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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14 u?.
MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 7:07 pm
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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lol small how old r u
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 5:25 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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um..ok? but just to let u know, its gonna be small no matter what
mrsensetive said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 10:05 am
ill post a new one then lol 
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 5:41 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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thats good that u plan on writing forever. as for how u look, its a random question and ur pic is crappy quality. so..sorry? but i cant tell
mrsensitive said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 8:51 am
i plan to write forever and ever am i cute
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 5:26 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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haha thx :) but seriously when you say "the lock to my heart has no key" i wanted to scream (in joy) because thats kinda been a topic on my mind lately. the key isnt lost, there just never was one to begin with. keep writing. id love to read more :)
mrsensitive said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 8:57 am
and you are definitly a cutie
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 5:30 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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huh? why not? u definetly are.
MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 3:51 pm
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments
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hihihihihihihihihihihi