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the soul

September 27, 2011
By MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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when you look at me?
what do you see?
I am the color black
a soul is what lack
so the shadows find me
the lock to my heart
which has no key
when i am alone
such agony makes me moan

looking at me
what do you see
if only i could be free


The author's comments:
i am inspired by my heart

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on Dec. 8 2011 at 10:06 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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thank you i dont think im very good

 


on Dec. 7 2011 at 8:04 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

oh goodness mrsensetive this is amazing. its exactly how i feel and i love how such little words can mean so much.

on Nov. 26 2011 at 5:09 pm
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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i like you your very sweet

on Nov. 26 2011 at 5:02 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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I like it, its very sweet. :)