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Who is that...
I shook my head and cocked it to the side. I groaned and pulled the covers over my head, only to make me feel trapped and sweaty. It was too quiet...
I lifted up my head from over the covers, and I sighed when I stared across my empty bedroom. The walls seemed to be an eerie blue, and my gasps came out in a hushed echo. It was only 9:00 pm. My parents were usually awake watching T.V or just listening to the radio, but this night was different. I could not hear ANYTHING.
Suddenly, I heard a voice that I did not recognize. The door was an inch open, but it was suddenly pushed full open, revealing a long silhouette that creeped on the bedroom door. I gasped and slowly slipped under the covers, trying to be unnoticable. Then, the blurry image seemed to crawl toward me, and I could finally see who this person was.
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I like the description in the beginning, it was well done. The only suggestion would be to add some more information on the character (age, ect.). That would really make me have emotions for him/her and be more worried about the outcome of the story. But, at the end your story really left me wanting more. Good work! :)
I just posted my first story to this site the other day and it also has a kindof creepy feel to it. If you could take a look at it and give me some feedback I'd really appreishate it.
