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September 27, 2011
By MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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when you look at me?
what do you see?
I am the color black
a soul is what lack
so the shadows find me
the lock to my heart
which has no key
when i am alone
such agony makes me moan

looking at me
what do you see
if only i could be free

© Matt F., Pierz, MN

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EmoAngel18 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 10 2012 at 3:26 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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&quot;Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan&quot;<br /> -by. Blood On The Dance Floor

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Well all i can really suggest is tht u continue to write and one day u will realize u can write almost anything, I too began writting only poetry then i started experimenting and trying to write stories then i soon realized i was a good writer. but dont lose hope, keep trying
mrsensetive said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 3:06 pm
im not only good at poetry ;)
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 2:52 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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&quot;Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan&quot;<br /> -by. Blood On The Dance Floor

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i bet u r good at writting but u just dont know it yet :)
MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Feb. 7 2012 at 10:53 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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im not that funny
MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 10:55 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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thank you it means alot
MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 10:55 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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hi im not that good at poetry
MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 10:05 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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wow you are really good you should keep writing definitly
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 29 2011 at 2:24 am
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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;> .............
MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2011 at 2:06 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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I am funny lol
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 29 2011 at 1:00 am
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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0.0 ur funny ;)
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 3:50 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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&quot;Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan&quot;<br /> -by. Blood On The Dance Floor

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thx tht means a lot to me.
MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 3:47 pm
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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lol ok ill read
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 3:38 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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&quot;Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan&quot;<br /> -by. Blood On The Dance Floor

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lol this poem is really good. i wrote a poem like this a few days ago but i havent had time to post it on my page.
izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 1:02 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
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*high fives* niiiiccceeeeee!!! i like it! ALOT! see! you ARE a FANTASTIC writer, AND poet... :D
MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 4:23 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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ok thank you cutie
A.A Siyal said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 4:20 am
Fabulous... u know the art of writing... inspired! :)
MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:23 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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only for food
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:11 am
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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they also kill
MrsensitiveE GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:10 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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wolves mate for life lol
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:07 am
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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-glares evily like a hungry wolf- ya..dead!! LOL